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Challenge: My Only Scar


I’m inspired to make this poem in 5 minutes because I’ve read from a friend of mine,that he has this another blog of poetry,8 or less. Which means that you can make a poem in only 8 minutes max! Oops,visit his blogs, Evoking the Deep , Unfamiliar Passage , and 8orless

If my thoughts are right,you can definitely contribute on the 80rless blog. Challenge yourselves WP friends!! Here’s my piece. 5 minutes,I can do it less but the keyboard here is such a mess!! Ha ha. Not bad,I know!!! (Shhh,Scott doesn’t know about it. :P ) By the way,I also want to share,take time to visit this blog, Romance with Val her posts are SUPERB!! Of course among other contributors there! :)

By the way,I did put a timer when I write this one! Ha Ha. :D

My Only Scar

If I want to have my heart broke
I want it to be from you
If I want my pride to choke
I’d do it for you

I’ll never regret anything
As long as it is from you
I will do everything
Even if it leaves me in blue

Break my innocence
I’d gladly take no offense
Be my all my firsts
Feed all my thirst

I want you to be only scar
One that I’d openly bare

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6 Comments

  1. Lovely :D

  2. I caught you! :D
    Hey, I want this poem on my blog :(
    I was going to ask if you wanted to write one for 8 or Less. Thanks so much for sharing the blogs here. You’re awesome Blue!

    • Uh.oh.. Am I under arrest?!? :P They’re worth the share,so no worries. Thank you for inviting me but I’ll think about it. That poem came rushing through my mind..and I don’t think it meets the standard! Lol.

      • It don’t meet the standard because it is too good maybe. There is no standard, except full heart and write like a free spirit on 8 or Less.
        Hugs

      • Lol. Too good to be true? Ha Ha. hhmm.. okay,I’ll still think about it. Don’t worry,if I can make a piece then I’ll send it to you. Oops,I’ll put a timer as well for sure! :D Thank you.

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